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Sudden Flame part 1 by hrymfaxe Sudden Flame part 1 by hrymfaxe
This is a short comic based on a short story by Dawn Felagund which may be found here. The words are Dawn's (used with her permission), the images are mine, and the caracters are Tolkien's...
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Annathelle26 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very interesting comic, I like it very much!:)
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hrymfaxe Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
Thank you very much. :)
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Sirielle Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2008   Digital Artist
Interesting start, I'm waiting for more. That's not the comic you were doing on LJ? On thing only - some words disappear merged with the background - those written with a delicate font, it would be good to separate them with a white border around the letters or something else. Very nice idea to make it in sepia, I like the way frames are placed, too :) Keep on drawing! :thumbsup:
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hrymfaxe Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2008
Thanks Sirielle! :D This is not that comic no. This was an attempt to illustrate Dawn's short story Sudden Flame as a gift for her birthday, so there are only these two pages. I really love the sepia look too.

I agree with you on the words disappearing, but I was also reluctant to draw too much attention to them by having them on a white background.. I'll go have a second look at them this weekend to see if I can make them a bit clearer. Perhaps this white border on the letters that you mention would be a nice idea.
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Sirielle Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2008   Digital Artist
You can slightly dodge the background only in places where text disappears, that should do the job.
(I have missed everybody's birthdays lately :()
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hrymfaxe Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2008
Yeah that's a good idea!

Have you been busy? It's a while since I saw you on lj?
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