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Sudden Flame part 1 by hrymfaxe Sudden Flame part 1 by hrymfaxe
This is a short comic based on a short story by Dawn Felagund which may be found here. The words are Dawn's (used with her permission), the images are mine, and the caracters are Tolkien's...
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Annathelle26 Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very interesting comic, I like it very much!:)
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:iconhrymfaxe:
Thank you very much. :)
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Sirielle Sep 18, 2008   Digital Artist
Interesting start, I'm waiting for more. That's not the comic you were doing on LJ? On thing only - some words disappear merged with the background - those written with a delicate font, it would be good to separate them with a white border around the letters or something else. Very nice idea to make it in sepia, I like the way frames are placed, too :) Keep on drawing! :thumbsup:
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Thanks Sirielle! :D This is not that comic no. This was an attempt to illustrate Dawn's short story Sudden Flame as a gift for her birthday, so there are only these two pages. I really love the sepia look too.

I agree with you on the words disappearing, but I was also reluctant to draw too much attention to them by having them on a white background.. I'll go have a second look at them this weekend to see if I can make them a bit clearer. Perhaps this white border on the letters that you mention would be a nice idea.
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Sirielle Sep 18, 2008   Digital Artist
You can slightly dodge the background only in places where text disappears, that should do the job.
(I have missed everybody's birthdays lately :()
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Yeah that's a good idea!

Have you been busy? It's a while since I saw you on lj?
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