Interesting start, I'm waiting for more. That's not the comic you were doing on LJ? On thing only - some words disappear merged with the background - those written with a delicate font, it would be good to separate them with a white border around the letters or something else. Very nice idea to make it in sepia, I like the way frames are placed, too Keep on drawing!
Thanks Sirielle! This is not that comic no. This was an attempt to illustrate Dawn's short story Sudden Flame as a gift for her birthday, so there are only these two pages. I really love the sepia look too.
I agree with you on the words disappearing, but I was also reluctant to draw too much attention to them by having them on a white background.. I'll go have a second look at them this weekend to see if I can make them a bit clearer. Perhaps this white border on the letters that you mention would be a nice idea.